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In the essay written by Safiya I can see shes taking her points and views consisting on the Tachyon part of the ARG. She makes Tachyon look like a hero fighting against evil which in this case is OpAhid. Safiya makes her seem like a spy or "James Bond" like character, reporting all her information to the head quaters this being the "YouTube" bloggers. She also makes Tachyon seem like a mystery to all the viewers a person without a past, a simple somebody who is there but at the same time isn't. Safiya chose to make this paper similar to an autobiography of Tachyon to make people understand that besides the main characters Bree, Daniel, and Jonas, there are others fighting this battle against Opahid and they are making a difference.
Audience- tried to be as discriptive as possible
Put out her personal point of view
Went the episode that best explains her essay
Criticism: Should've talked a little more about the main characters of LG15 to make the reader understand why they need her help.
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